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dum-aay aaghee chahhtaa houn, hijr cee rassaiee chahtaa houn
paak meh-loun mein rehnaay wali, tri deedaa numaiee chahtaa houn

mubhim rahaay maa'niee, gur meri rawa-shay shouq kay
kiya kum hai, joo tri pazeeraai chahtaa houn

phir tra-yy husun nay kiya hai kheera mujh koo
phir tri roo-aay been'aa chahtaa houn

tuu joo bai-thaa rahay maraiy sam-nay jaam'e-jum leyaa
ubb daa'ghay mufa-ri-qat key saraa'iee chahtaa houn

waah, aaj joo niklay hoo kiss kh-ooo mein
phir mout say na'b-burud azzmaiee chahtaa houn

phir teraay hazour key khabar aa'-yee hai, muhh-sin
phir koi goona goona, jushun numaiee hai

shouq'ey weh-shut muuhaal rahaa, jaan wabaal raha
phir ablaa paiee ki jasaa'rut chahtaa houn

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lalay..Thanks for looking at these verses. I would like people to understand my poem/ghazal, so let me know what is unclear to you or you are referring to the whole thing?

shouq'ey weh-shut muuhaal rahaa, jaan wabaal raha
phir ablaa paiee ki jasaa'rut chahtaa houn....

lalay I wish I could contribute any thing here.. but I am not competent enough to even fully understand your poem, let alone suggesting a title.

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