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Thaame haath uss jaane chal para mein kahan
khushian bikhrein thein har tarak ajab tha saman
na thein kehin tanhaiyaan aur dil bi tha beyfikar
uss ke peechey chalte nikal geya jaane kis dagar
masti ka alam tha uss ke jahan mein jese ho paristaan
jee mein aaya key keh dhoon tum hee tu ho meri jaan
muskura ke dheka muhjey jese sunn lee ho dil ki taan
ab keh bi do ju dil mein hay keyon larkharati hay zubaan
bholi phir mugh se aayo le chaloon phuloon ke uss paar
koyi gam nehin jahan baharein kar rehin hein intizaar
patta bi na chala kab le urri mughey kab uttra uss paar
woh nasha ajeeb sa tha kisi cheez pe raha na koyi ikhtiyar
garja baadil tu gabra ke mugh se leepat giyi
thori si sharmai woh aur thori si samat giyi
baahein thaam ke uss ki dheere se mein bhola
ho kisi aur jahan ki fursat mein banaya Tu ne Mula
khulli ju aankh tu pata challa sab ik khaab tha
dil tha bujhal aur aansooyon ik ka salaab tha
band ki aankein shahid phir se dhekoon sapna
chuh sakoon uss ko shahid koyi mil jaaye apna
khushian bikhrein thein har tarak ajab tha saman
na thein kehin tanhaiyaan aur dil bi tha beyfikar
uss ke peechey chalte nikal geya jaane kis dagar
masti ka alam tha uss ke jahan mein jese ho paristaan
jee mein aaya key keh dhoon tum hee tu ho meri jaan
muskura ke dheka muhjey jese sunn lee ho dil ki taan
ab keh bi do ju dil mein hay keyon larkharati hay zubaan
bholi phir mugh se aayo le chaloon phuloon ke uss paar
koyi gam nehin jahan baharein kar rehin hein intizaar
patta bi na chala kab le urri mughey kab uttra uss paar
woh nasha ajeeb sa tha kisi cheez pe raha na koyi ikhtiyar
garja baadil tu gabra ke mugh se leepat giyi
thori si sharmai woh aur thori si samat giyi
baahein thaam ke uss ki dheere se mein bhola
ho kisi aur jahan ki fursat mein banaya Tu ne Mula
khulli ju aankh tu pata challa sab ik khaab tha
dil tha bujhal aur aansooyon ik ka salaab tha
band ki aankein shahid phir se dhekoon sapna
chuh sakoon uss ko shahid koyi mil jaaye apna
Comments on this journal
aisii tanhaa_ii ki mar jaane ko jii chaahataa hai
Ek dafa apne aap spell check kar lo especially because its in Roman Urdu.
Since you asked me I will also add that it does lack some kind of depth. But again, all poems are not masterpieces and its a very good attempt since we are not professionals.