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niiyat-e-s hauq bhar na jaaye kahii.n


Niiyat-e-shauq bhar na jaaye kahii.n
tuu bhii dil se utar na jaaye kahii.n

aaj dekhaa hai tujhe der ke baad
aaj kaa din guzar na jaaye kahii.n

na milaa kar udaas logo.n se
husn teraa bikhar na jaaye kahii.n

aarazuu hai ke tuu yahaa.N aaye
aur phir umr bhar na jaaye kahii.n

jii jalaataa huu.N aur ye sochataa huu.N
raayegaa.N ye hunar na jaaye kahii.n

aao kuchh der ro hii le.n 'Nasir'
phir ye dariyaa utar na jaaye kahii.n

------------------------NASIR KAZMI-------------------------
 

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Login to find out (March 24, 2007 at 2:41pm)
welcome:D
 
Login to find out (March 24, 2007 at 2:03pm)
thanks....My interpretation was that the person did not want to live anymore...thanks for clarifying.
 
Login to find out (March 24, 2007 at 1:22pm)
no ghustakhi at all dear....first of all thanx for liking my collection. and dear nice to meet u too.
Now turn by turn replies:
1-when someone feel hurt in love and when one relation broke it internally pinch u, and our poetry based on such kind of a harsh life experiences.Thats y in first line the poet said ' ajeeb larki hon khud ko jalana chahti hon' means the break up has hurted me extremely that even fire could not burn me.
2-'khud ko rakh kai bhol jana chaiti hon' means i am now fed up of this fake world,looking for solace and peace,serene and quite place is destination seems to be.

if any other question i am always here
 
Login to find out (March 24, 2007 at 10:15am)
Actually I am pleased to meet you......I sense a depth about you even from so far away....I have been meaning to ask you......

What motivates a person to write this....
"Ajeeb larki hoon khud ko jalana chahtee hoon
Mai khud ko rakh ker kaheen bhool jana chahtee hoon"

Poetry comes from the heart ...could you elaborate what the author was thinking that time? Gustaqi Maaf?
 
Login to find out (March 24, 2007 at 9:21am)
bohat meherbani...............shukriya
 
Login to find out (March 24, 2007 at 9:18am)
ha ha ha ......that was lovely....Maybe I saw it with a positive view the sun is pouring through my window and I just woke up...bahut mazaa aya