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Mein aur Shayer


Aghaaz kahin se to karna hai to kyun nah iss mazmun ke sath?



Ek zamana tha jub mein kisi bhi fankar ke baare mein sochta tha to mere zehen mein yeh khyal aata tha keh fankar ko Khuda ne kisi khas andaz se banaya hoga ya shayad koi khas mitti istemaal ki gayee hogi.



I mean, in my mind, artists are very special people. Very talented and God gifted. Besides practice and rehearsal and development of skills, imagination and creativity plays a vital role.



Choti si baat hai. Agar hum aur aap jaisa ek aam shakhs yeh kehna chaahe keh "raat bhar mein so nahin saka" to hum kya kahainge?



- Raat bhar neend nahin aayee

- Raat bhar becheni rahi

- Raat bhar karwatain badalta raha

- Raat bhar taare ginta raha



Hamari soch iss hud se paar nahin jaati keh "raat bhar taare ginta raha".



Yehi baat Sahir Ludhinavi kehte hain

Der tuk aankhoN mein "chubhti rahi taaroN ki chamak".

Waah!



Der tuk zehen sulagta raha tanhaai mein

Par apne thukraye huwe dost ki parastish ke liye

"Tu" nah aayee iss raat ki pehnaii mein



Yahan "Tu" sirf "neend" ke liye kaha gaya hai.

Wow!
 

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Login to find out (June 12, 2009 at 3:00pm)
Mal
this was the 1st VE in this village
 
Login to find out (December 14, 2006 at 2:59pm)
Bohot khoob...very nice. Itteffaq ki baat keh abhi Nasir Kazmi he ka ek aur VE likha hai mein ne yahan he...
 
Login to find out (December 14, 2006 at 2:54pm)
kuchh to ehasaas-e-ziyaa.N thaa pahale
dil kaa ye haal kahaa.N thaa pahale

ab to manzil bhii hai Khud garm-e-safar
har qadam sang-e-nishaa.N thaa pahale

Nasir
 
Login to find out (December 14, 2006 at 12:58pm)
You mean to say haalaat (circumstances)?

I would say that circumstances can play an important role in the intensity of development or decline of talents in a person but cannot create artistic quality if the person does not have them.
 
Login to find out (December 14, 2006 at 12:07pm)
But its really good. Wazan mein bhi and sharp contrasts...
 
Login to find out (December 14, 2006 at 12:03pm)
Waah Waah!

Yeh Nageen bol rahi haiN?
Shayer bol raha hai?
Ya Nageen shayera bol rahi haiN?