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Lafz "DIL"


Hazreen

Baitbaazi to chalti he rahegi, chalain ek aur nayee cheez ka aghaz karaiN.

Aisa karte haiN keh koi ek lafz makhsoos kar lete haiN....maslan iss dafa "dil".

Aise ashaar likhaiN jin meiN lafz "dil" aata ho.

Pehla sher mein likhta huN

"Ek but mujhe bhi gosha-e-DIL meiN para mila
Wayez ko yeh wehem keh ussi ko khuda mila"
 

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Login to find out (January 2, 2007 at 11:56pm)
yaad karanaa har gha.Dii us yaar kaa
hai vazifaa mujh dil-e-bimaar kaa

Wali Mohammad Wali
 
Login to find out (December 29, 2006 at 10:17am)
chaahat ke badale me.n ham to bech de.n apanii marzii tak
ko_ii mile to dil kaa gaahak ko_ii hame.n apanaaye to


ab bas aur koi dil shil pai nahi.. and for the time being I am leaving now for work.... inshaAllah folks join you soon till than Allah HAfiz
 
Login to find out (December 29, 2006 at 8:56am)
OK folks...such an easy and commonly word "DIL" was selected so that we can start inter-acting. Now having done that we shall soon change the theme word. Till then, keep posting.
:)
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 11:02pm)
na jaao haal-e-dil-e-zaar dekhate jaao
ki jii na chaahe to naachaar dekhate jaao
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 3:01pm)
Raat dil main teree khoi huee yaad aa'yee
Jesay veeranay main chupke say bahaar ajaay
Jesay sehra main chalay holay say baad-e-naseem
Jesay beemaar ko bewaja qaraar aa'ja'ay

Faiz
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 12:05pm)
itanaa to huaa ai dil ik shaKhs ke jaane se
bichha.De hue milate hai.n kuchh dost puraane se
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 11:33am)
DIL dharakne ka sabab yaad aaya
Woh teri yaad thi ab yaad aaya
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 11:22am)
yuu.N hii dil ke ta.Dapane kaa kuchh to hai sabab aaKhir
yaa.N dard ne karavaT lii hai yaa.N tumane idhar dekhaa
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 10:51am)
Aaj DIL khol ke roye hain to yun khush hain "Faraz"
Chand lamhon ki yeh rahat bhi bari ho jaise
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 10:47am)
dil abhii tak javaan hai pyaare
kis musiibat me.n jaan hai pyaare

tuu mere haal kaa Khayaal na kar
is me.n bhii ek shaan hai pyaare
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 10:14am)
Bohot khoob...excellent one.

ShamoN mein ek sham...woh awaargi ki sham
Woh DIL nahiN raha...tabeeat nahiN rahi
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 10:13am)
wehshat-o-junoo.n mein ajab silsile huwe
muddat huwe hai khud se bhee mujh ko mile huew

koee gawahee zehen ki tehri na mutabir
DIL ki adalato.n mein ajab faisley huwe...
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 9:54am)
Koi humnafas nahiN hai, koi raazdaaN nahiN hai
Faqat ek DIL tha apna, sau woh meherbaan nahiN hai
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 9:51am)
dard-e-dil me.n kamii na ho jaaye
dostii dushmanii na ho jaaye

tum merii dostii kaa dam na bharo
aasmaa.N mudda_ii na ho jaaye
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 9:40am)
Bohot khoob

On second thoughts, lets keep it to a single sher only as that will be most appropriate for the word selected.

My contribution:
"Kisi bewafa ki fitrat hargiz bhi khatawaar nahiN
Lekin DIL-e-kambakht, thokar nayee khata raha"

-Me
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 9:23am)
Leejya janaab, ek Shaer kia, puree ghazal kahe dete hain: Please enjoy;

kisi se door jaana chahta hoon
mein khud ko azmana chahta hoon

shikast-e-DIL zara awaz dena
junoo ki hed pe anaa chahta hoon

tabassum ashna nazron ke terha
tasawwer ka bahana chahta hoon

laga de aag jo sare jana'n mein
ek aysa geet gana chahta hoon

aya.N wo raz ker deti hein aankhe.N
mein sab se jo choopana chahta hoon

tumharee yaad ka le ker sahara
tumhee.N ko bhool jana chahta hoon....