Lafz "DIL"
Hazreen
Baitbaazi to chalti he rahegi, chalain ek aur nayee cheez ka aghaz karaiN.
Aisa karte haiN keh koi ek lafz makhsoos kar lete haiN....maslan iss dafa "dil".
Aise ashaar likhaiN jin meiN lafz "dil" aata ho.
Pehla sher mein likhta huN
"Ek but mujhe bhi gosha-e-DIL meiN para mila
Wayez ko yeh wehem keh ussi ko khuda mila"
Baitbaazi to chalti he rahegi, chalain ek aur nayee cheez ka aghaz karaiN.
Aisa karte haiN keh koi ek lafz makhsoos kar lete haiN....maslan iss dafa "dil".
Aise ashaar likhaiN jin meiN lafz "dil" aata ho.
Pehla sher mein likhta huN
"Ek but mujhe bhi gosha-e-DIL meiN para mila
Wayez ko yeh wehem keh ussi ko khuda mila"



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hai vazifaa mujh dil-e-bimaar kaa
Wali Mohammad Wali
ko_ii mile to dil kaa gaahak ko_ii hame.n apanaaye to
ab bas aur koi dil shil pai nahi.. and for the time being I am leaving now for work.... inshaAllah folks join you soon till than Allah HAfiz
:)
ki jii na chaahe to naachaar dekhate jaao
Jesay veeranay main chupke say bahaar ajaay
Jesay sehra main chalay holay say baad-e-naseem
Jesay beemaar ko bewaja qaraar aa'ja'ay
Faiz
bichha.De hue milate hai.n kuchh dost puraane se
Woh teri yaad thi ab yaad aaya
yaa.N dard ne karavaT lii hai yaa.N tumane idhar dekhaa
Chand lamhon ki yeh rahat bhi bari ho jaise
kis musiibat me.n jaan hai pyaare
tuu mere haal kaa Khayaal na kar
is me.n bhii ek shaan hai pyaare
ShamoN mein ek sham...woh awaargi ki sham
Woh DIL nahiN raha...tabeeat nahiN rahi
muddat huwe hai khud se bhee mujh ko mile huew
koee gawahee zehen ki tehri na mutabir
DIL ki adalato.n mein ajab faisley huwe...
Faqat ek DIL tha apna, sau woh meherbaan nahiN hai
dostii dushmanii na ho jaaye
tum merii dostii kaa dam na bharo
aasmaa.N mudda_ii na ho jaaye
On second thoughts, lets keep it to a single sher only as that will be most appropriate for the word selected.
My contribution:
"Kisi bewafa ki fitrat hargiz bhi khatawaar nahiN
Lekin DIL-e-kambakht, thokar nayee khata raha"
-Me
kisi se door jaana chahta hoon
mein khud ko azmana chahta hoon
shikast-e-DIL zara awaz dena
junoo ki hed pe anaa chahta hoon
tabassum ashna nazron ke terha
tasawwer ka bahana chahta hoon
laga de aag jo sare jana'n mein
ek aysa geet gana chahta hoon
aya.N wo raz ker deti hein aankhe.N
mein sab se jo choopana chahta hoon
tumharee yaad ka le ker sahara
tumhee.N ko bhool jana chahta hoon....