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Hamesha der kar deta huN


zaruurii baat kahanii ho
koii vaadaa nibhaanaa ho
use aavaaz denii ho
use vaapas bulaanaa ho
hameshaa der kar detaa huu.N mai.n


madad karanii ho usakii
yaar kii dhaa.Das ba.Ndhaanaa ho
bahut deriinaa raasto.n par
kisii se milane jaanaa ho
hameshaa der kar detaa huu.N mai.n





badalate mausamo.n kii sair me.n
dil ko lagaanaa ho
kisii ko yaad rakhanaa ho
kisii ko bhuul jaanaa ho
hameshaa der kar detaa huu.N mai.n


kisii ko maut se pahale
kisii Gam se bachaanaa ho
haqiiqat aur thii kuchh
us ko jaa ke ye bataanaa ho
hameshaa der kar detaa huu.N mai.n


-Munir Niazi
 

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Login to find out (August 10, 2007 at 2:04pm)
raat bhar diidaa-e-Gam-naak me.n laharaate rahe
saa.Ns kii tarah se aap aate rahe, jaate rahe
 
Login to find out (August 10, 2007 at 9:24am)
Der bohot ki aane meiN tum ne, shukar hai phir bhi aaye tou
Aas ne dil ka sath nah choRha, waise hum ghabraye tou
 
Login to find out (August 10, 2007 at 9:23am)
Waah waah Ambreen. Waise der aaye darust aaye
 
Login to find out (August 10, 2007 at 9:23am)
and correction. it shud have been : dil khush kar ditta
 
Login to find out (August 10, 2007 at 9:21am)
Good at least yeh to saabit huwa keh tum dil bhi rakhti ho :P
 
Login to find out (August 10, 2007 at 9:17am)
Aray aap ke liye he tou post ki hai YB
Mention naat
:)
 
Login to find out (August 10, 2007 at 1:09am)
Thanks Nageen.

FC
Very true. There's something so unique about this poem as well as Munir Niazis style.
 
Login to find out (August 10, 2007 at 1:03am)
I can never get over the sadness of this poem!

It has been seven years since I first read that poem and have read numerous this since then but nothing can say it better than:

kisii ko maut se pahale
kisii Gam se bachaanaa ho
haqiiqat aur thii kuchh
us ko jaa ke ye bataanaa ho
hameshaa der kar detaa huu.N mai.n
 
Login to find out (August 9, 2007 at 11:41am)
Dar to mujhe kiskaa hai ke mai.n kuchh nahii.n kahataa
par haal ye afshaa.N hai ke mai.n kuchh nahii.n kahataa