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Ghazal


Tum nay aahista say hamara naam lya saaqi
Hum bhee ro dye tumhain yaad kartay kartay

Ye nashaa-e-pyaar bhee khoob hay yaro
Barsay hain phool kaanton pay chaltay chaltay

Kat-ta naheen koi lamha tujh say juda
Phiray hain bechain rooh hum intezaar kartay kartay

Neend naheen aatee teree juda?aee main sanam
Raat katee hay ub sitaron ko taktay taktay

Aur kitna imtehan lo gay apna jaanum
Hu?ay hain khushk aansoo gaal say girtay girtay

(C) Atif M
 

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Login to find out (December 29, 2006 at 8:51pm)
hmm no more comment.. it seems like that now 'lage raho munna bhai'...
 
Login to find out (December 29, 2006 at 1:44pm)
MK

Actually its a lovely ghazal sung by jagjeet

Shayad meiN zindagi ki seher le ke aa gaya
Qaatil ko aaj apne he ghar le ke aa gaya

Last sher is

Khanjar hai mere haath meiN, kaandhoN pe maikadah
Lo meiN ilaaj-e-dard-ejigar le ke aa gaya
 
Login to find out (December 29, 2006 at 1:38pm)
Wah bohat khoob....gard-e-safar lay kar aa gya... wah.... kye kehnay :)
 
Login to find out (December 29, 2006 at 9:39am)
Kuch bhi ho lekin:

Taa umr dhonndta raha, manzil meiN ishq ki
Anjaam yeh keh gard-e-safar le ke aa gaya
 
Login to find out (December 29, 2006 at 9:32am)
hmmm phir tau aik rasta aur bhi hai:
ishq kyaa chiiz hai ye puuchhiye paravaane se
zindagii jis ko mayassar hu_ii jal jaane se
 
Login to find out (December 29, 2006 at 9:01am)
Theres another side of the picture too...for instance:

Kabhi laut aayain to poochna nahiN
Dekhna unhaiN ghaur se
JinahaiN raaste meiN kahabar huwi
Keh yeh raasta koi aur hai
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 11:07pm)
ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa
aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 2:53pm)
hmmm... good points... but then Iqbal saw it differently ...

Agar ho ishq, to kufr bhee hay musalmaani
No ho to mard-e-muslaman bhee kafir-o-zandeeq

but then he was different :)
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 11:21am)
ishq fanaa kaa naam hai ishq me.n zindagii na dekh
jalvaaa-e-aaftaab ban zarre me.n roshanii na dekh
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 9:52am)
Woh sher hai nah:

"Woh to nah mil sakay, hamaiN ruswaaiyaaN mileeN
Lekin hamare ishq ko raaniyaaN mileeN"
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 9:48am)
In fact I say...no risk, no life
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 9:48am)
No risk...no game
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 9:46am)
nice comment by "Horizon753 "...applause....but i think precautions are better than cure
 
Login to find out (December 28, 2006 at 9:20am)
Hmmm there is a cure too of this "sickness" and I shall sum it like this

"Love is a temporary insanity, curable by marriage".
Lolz.
 
Login to find out (December 25, 2006 at 3:31pm)
thank you... let's hope this sickness is not too contagious :)
 
Login to find out (December 25, 2006 at 12:52am)
Wah ! .. Good expression of a universal sickness :)