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Dying Inside


Something so hard
goes straight to the soul;
it seems impossible to get over
and my heart is left with a big hole.

I'm trying to be happy, wearing a smile;
but I'm dying inside.
The world seems to be fading,
and I just want to run and hide.

Everywhere I go I hear your voice,
and realize how much I miss you;
and on the day you died
a piece of me died too.
 

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Login to find out (March 8, 2007 at 2:09am)
tight word.....deep and cool way to express it.
 
Login to find out (March 2, 2007 at 5:15pm)
Not my own words, but my own sensations.
 
Login to find out (February 28, 2007 at 9:02am)
nice work. yours?