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Baitbaazi
As yet, we are only 20 members. We need more inter-action and more participation.
I thought Baitbaazi would be a nice way to break ice.
I am posting a sher below. Someone should post a sher starting with the letter with which my sher end and so on. If possible try adding the poets name if you know.
Chand kaliyaN chun kar
Nishat ki muddattoN mehwe yaas rehta huN
Tera milna khushi ki baat sahih tujh se mil kar udaas rehta huN
Sahir Ludhianvi
Next sher should start from letter N
I thought Baitbaazi would be a nice way to break ice.
I am posting a sher below. Someone should post a sher starting with the letter with which my sher end and so on. If possible try adding the poets name if you know.
Chand kaliyaN chun kar
Nishat ki muddattoN mehwe yaas rehta huN
Tera milna khushi ki baat sahih tujh se mil kar udaas rehta huN
Sahir Ludhianvi
Next sher should start from letter N
Comments on this journal
Some people just have to make everything in life sound like rocket science or a global issue... God save our humor from them :P
itane junuu.N aasaar na the
Ab jaam do to khali he do, meiN nashay meiN huN
Maaf kya again
:P
ab do to jaam khaalii hii do mai.n nashe me.n huu.N
shukar ... this time 'noon' sahib....
BTW baazi to tum ne ussi din bhi jeet li thi jub woh Pathan ka JE likha tha...lolz. I really found that hilarious and the funny part is that some people were trying to make an issue out of it saying that is racism...stupid. I still remember that JE of yours.
Manzil k liay do gaam chaloon, or samany manzil aa jaaey
mo'ajuzaa tere vaade kaa vafaa ho jaanaa
diay tu diay dil bhe bujhay ja rahay hain
baharoon may bhe may say perhaiz tuba
khumaar aap tu kafir hoay jaa rahay hain
Ab mujh ko zindagi ki zaroorat nahiN rahi
_Khumar Barabankvi
Again YEH :)
sab ne merii muhabbat kaa ehataraam kiyaa
lab pe mushkil se terii baat aa_ii
subah se chup hai.n tere hijr nasiib
haaye kyaa hogaa agar raat aa_ii
nashaae-may ko taluk naheen paymanay say
hay ayan yorosh-e-tatar ke afsanon say
pasbaan mil ga'ay haram ko sanam khanay say
Iqbal at is best ...
Ye is next...
Dhal gayaa hijr kaa din aa bhii ga_ii vasl kii raat
werna tum say tu hum soo ghulam rakhtay thay
jo haath jigar pe hai vo dast-e-duaa hotaa
ishq hotta tu koye baat bhe thee
hubaab-e-mauj-e-raftaar hai, naqsh-e-qadam meraa
Nah meiN tere jaisa huN
:P
apanii dhun me.n rahataa huu.N
mai.n bhii tere jaisaa huu.N