aaj ka din bhi aish say goozraa
koee haalut nahee(n) ye(h) haalut hei
ye(h) to aashobnaak soorat hai
unjoomunn mein ye mayree khaamoe'shee
boordbaari nahee(n) hei vehshut hei
tujh-say ye(h) gaah gaah ka shikwa
jub tulluck hei bussa-ghuneemut hei
khahishien dil ka saath chhor gaieen(n)
ye(h) uzeeyut burree uzeeyut hei
loge musroof jaantay hein moojhay
yaan mera ghum hee mayree foorsutt hei
tunz pairaa-e-tub'ussoom mein
iss tukulloof kee kya zeroorut hei
hum-nay day-kha to(h) hum-nay ye(h) day-kha
jo nahee(n) hei wo khoob'soorut hei
vaar kerrnay ko jaa(n)nisaar aayein
ye to eesaar hei inaayat hei
gerr'm-joeshee aur iss qadar kya baat
kya tumhein moojh-say kootch shikaayutt hei
ab nikull aao upnay underr say
ghar mein saamaan ki zaroorutt hei
aaj ka din bhi aish say goozraa
serr say paa tukk bud'un selaamut hei
Jaun Elia
ye(h) to aashobnaak soorat hai
unjoomunn mein ye mayree khaamoe'shee
boordbaari nahee(n) hei vehshut hei
tujh-say ye(h) gaah gaah ka shikwa
jub tulluck hei bussa-ghuneemut hei
khahishien dil ka saath chhor gaieen(n)
ye(h) uzeeyut burree uzeeyut hei
loge musroof jaantay hein moojhay
yaan mera ghum hee mayree foorsutt hei
tunz pairaa-e-tub'ussoom mein
iss tukulloof kee kya zeroorut hei
hum-nay day-kha to(h) hum-nay ye(h) day-kha
jo nahee(n) hei wo khoob'soorut hei
vaar kerrnay ko jaa(n)nisaar aayein
ye to eesaar hei inaayat hei
gerr'm-joeshee aur iss qadar kya baat
kya tumhein moojh-say kootch shikaayutt hei
ab nikull aao upnay underr say
ghar mein saamaan ki zaroorutt hei
aaj ka din bhi aish say goozraa
serr say paa tukk bud'un selaamut hei
Jaun Elia



Comments on this journal
Do you know that the moulvi's refused to grace his soyem? He kept wailing in his poetry about not having found wholesomeness and in his death he was condemned by his generation, the one before it and a few in the one after for having led the kind of life he did and especially for having separated from his wife and children and for not having been a 'good husband'. Ironic.!
And yes truthful to the core and in such a cut and dried unadulterated manner.. like all great minds and great people, his genius was hardly fathomed in his life.. and was only just a lil more appreciated after his death.. and yet he is still compared to other so called 'greats' where as not one of them can truly be compared to him...
and here I thought I was going to be brief :)
He lead a frustrating life as he felt that his talents hace gone wasted. He would not let his works published and his first book was published titeled "Shayad" I think, when he was 60.
In 1980 he had to go for a divorce and henceforth he had become an alcoholic. His work and thinking have always been on very different lines....
yaan mera ghum hee mayree foorsutt hei
Too good
He really had a style. He could say so much using so few words. Mostly his ghazals are in short "beher".