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Word

By Chiragh-e-Raah
 

AOA - originally penned in July 2013

A Word

A word to the wise
quit with the lies
do not despise
hear those cries
wake up before all dies

the silent calls u must hear
in reality they are so near
take the blinkers off and see
listen to the plea

search your soul, you must
soon all will be dust
value the people in your life
forget all the other strife
spring clean do if must
remove any that are rust
corrosion you do not need
only good to your soul you must feed

everyday take a fresh look
not all is an open book
search, you must all the time
for many life is not sublime

do not take for granted those near
some of them do live in fear
sacrifices you must make
for your and their sake
do not be the sacrificial lamb
fine balance must be struck, answers come in calm

search your conscience, clearly do
erase the dust and mildew
with clear heart and mind
learn to be really kind

starvation is not just of food and drink
real test is how close you come to the brink
but still do not sink
even when others bruise ur heart and soul
it is then u must dig deep, and other virtues extol

wake up wake up and see
take action now, don't just let it be
tomorrow may be too late
don't make that your fate

All rights reserved .. copyright july 2013 (R/Ch)

 
   Comments: 15     Raters: 1     May 1, 2014 at 2:02pm         
 

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Chiragh-e-Raah (May 3, 2014 at 3:52pm)
i dont recall asking what yours was Pax.....kindly do not use my journals for your purposes. thanks
 
Chiragh-e-Raah (May 3, 2014 at 3:48pm)
who dons which mask, when , for how long, for what reasons/purpose etc ....aah well....what can i say but yup experienced that often , in both virtual and real life :)
 
Chiragh-e-Raah (May 3, 2014 at 3:46pm)
thanks pax...but you will note , as i have intimated before about any person ...i go by personal experience etc...and also i have clearly stated here 'thus far' etc.

I am under no illusions that people can change their minds/actions etc and have done, some quicker than others :P , each has their own choices to make.
 
Chiragh-e-Raah (May 2, 2014 at 4:35pm)
Fact is Fact ...Mr G .....
 
GOD (May 2, 2014 at 4:19pm)
Encouragement and motivation are always welcome. Thanks, CR!
 
Chiragh-e-Raah (May 2, 2014 at 3:21pm)
Pax...yes indeed ...reality is both you and he used some umm choice derogatory insulting comments/personal attacks etc The difference though being, that once he apologised ( for whatever reason) he has followed through on his apology and shown more restraint, and made and is making efforts to not behave like that again - at least not with me or in my presence. ie he has not only kept his word, thus far, but demonstrated by action too.

So no Mr G i am not going to chuck it , because i make up my own mind :P and yes Pax if i wanted to delete i would have anyway :)
 
GOD (May 2, 2014 at 3:13pm)
Seen it. Chuck it.
 
GOD (May 2, 2014 at 1:27pm)
Good one, CR! no pun intended there...
 
Chiragh-e-Raah (May 2, 2014 at 1:22pm)
which one Mr G , the revenge one or anxiety one ? :)
 
GOD (May 2, 2014 at 1:19pm)
LOL what a nick!
 
Chiragh-e-Raah (May 2, 2014 at 6:15am)
Pax....when i make journals...they are general Journals.....!!

Who has/hasn't and when / how often 'harassed me'...i am well aware of, as is my maker.

Plse refrain from making comments on my journal(s)...if not in relation to actual journal itself or, as i have noted before, any personal vendettas / agendas /fighting /rudeness/ disrespect etc . Thanks...i will delete irrelevant / rude / disrespectful etc comments from hereon in.
 
Chiragh-e-Raah (May 1, 2014 at 5:49pm)
No thank you.
 
anxiety0depress (May 1, 2014 at 5:39pm)
i can help!
 
Chiragh-e-Raah (May 1, 2014 at 2:25pm)
Mr G....yup suddenly some problems arose with the one i had posted earlier today , which i couldn't resolve. So i had to delete whole thing and then re-do
 
GOD (May 1, 2014 at 2:18pm)
Re-posted your journal?