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Sometimes.....

By Chiragh-e-Raah

Sometimes

Sometimes it all just gets too much
At times, it is the pain of others as such
Other times it is own heartaches
So much, that it feels as if whole ground breaks

Look around, look around
Open your eyes and truly see
In all honesty there is little glee
The reality is hard to bear
But who does really care

How much more, how much more....
As again and again hands are raised in earnest
and Head is bowed in humility before the dearest
prayers sent upwards to one who created
Words that come and go
As the gates open and tears do flow
Not for others to see
Because from reality all do flee

At times, like a fish out of water
We all do flounder
Gasping for that breath
Fighing for life until death
Clutching at hope
Making sure we dont hang by our own rope

Grin and bear it
A master of disguises
Try to ease it for others
When all done and said...who really bothers
Cheery smiles do put on
Good words and actions don

A new day is dawning
As one stretches while yawning
Eager that this will be better
Hope and stubborness go together
Even though strength does sometimes fetter
Sun's rays spread out
To dispel any doubt
Live to smile and try another day

Sometimes, it does just all get too much
But must never forget to care
and pass a smile to share
as that might just ease life for someone out there

� R/Ch - all rights reserved
(first posted 30th Jan 2010)

Comments: 22 Raters: 0 May 3, 2014 at 7:01am

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Numtarik (May 6, 2014 at 12:13pm)

ah uh pain

Admirer481 (May 4, 2014 at 5:56pm)

Wa'alaykum salaam .... jannatul Maqaam .... doe'zakhul haraam! :)

Admirer481 (May 4, 2014 at 5:56pm)

ehm ehm! :P

Chiragh-e-Raah (May 4, 2014 at 5:34pm)

Asalamo-Alaikum ....oh acha, that's good to know admirer saab :P i will most surely keep a look out and bear in mind it could well be you has chalked them loll

Admirer481 (May 4, 2014 at 5:22pm)

I did cross so many roads ..... from my home to the beaches of Brighton and Hove! ...... if you see wavy lines then you should be able to guess who may have chalked these! :P

Admirer481 (May 4, 2014 at 5:19pm)

G-D, I'm fine, thanks for asking. How are you?

GOD (May 3, 2014 at 7:49pm)

Long time, no see admirer bro. How have you been?

Chiragh-e-Raah (May 3, 2014 at 6:29pm)

well, at least you have decided it would have to be in the morning ....and you have indicated you wish to cross the road, whether you chalk or not is another matter :)

Admirer481 (May 3, 2014 at 6:15pm)

Have I? ... I thought I may still be unambiguous :)

Chiragh-e-Raah (May 3, 2014 at 6:10pm)

acha, vaesai you have answered your question yourself of when you have to or may cross the road :P

Admirer481 (May 3, 2014 at 6:03pm)

Wa'Alaykum salaam, ....... at the moment I can't cross the road ..... as I am at home! :) ..... next morning I'll see if I have a chalk ...... to cross the road :P ..... fingers crossed! :)

Chiragh-e-Raah (May 3, 2014 at 5:46pm)

AOA Admirer saab....:)
first you have to decide if you wish to cross the road, then chose when to :P the choice is yours loll

Admirer481 (May 3, 2014 at 5:35pm)

"Look around, look around
Open your eyes and truly see "

Yes I do! ... when I have to cross a road :P

Chiragh-e-Raah (May 3, 2014 at 12:59pm)

Thank you Broken_wings :)

whoz-yo-daddy (May 3, 2014 at 12:56pm)

Chiragh-e-Raah (May 3, 2014 at 12:54pm)

is good to have some raunoq....been a long time since that has happened, and you are all part of it :)

whoz-yo-daddy (May 3, 2014 at 12:52pm)

You got some raunoq on your journal, i am Jealous :D

Chiragh-e-Raah (May 3, 2014 at 12:51pm)

loll WuD..you know me, i try to avoid making assumptions but also like to acknowledge any comment too :)
aww, thank you

whoz-yo-daddy (May 3, 2014 at 12:48pm)

Does it really matter what imran had shared? :)
Chiraag, you are one in a million :)

Broken-Wings (May 3, 2014 at 12:42pm)

nice :)