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sheyr

By americanheart
 

Aaj phir be-naqaab chehron ne pardah nasheenon ka mazaaq urraya hai
lazzat-e-dunya se ashna ehl-e-dozakh ne, jannat ke makeenon ka mazaq uraya hai

 
   Comments: 12     Raters: 0     March 12, 2014 at 10:39pm         
 

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Chiragh-e-Raah (March 25, 2014 at 4:20pm)
please nauroz, you have no reason or need to justify yourself to me , let alone anyone else. I am no one to judge anyone. I am sorry you have had to go through all that, but then again that is the way of the world /life to a large degree too and yes at times one has to give back etc. even if just for their own sanity loll or whatever.
Once again, i am a mere mortal, far from perfect and have my faults too ...so there is absolutely no need to feel ashamed or need to apologise to me. I am no saint , none of us are loll...
 
naurozkhayal (March 25, 2014 at 2:47pm)
chiragh-e-raah,sorry could not get in touch with you ,lately i had to suffer indignities of the worst kind at the hands of some ruffians at naseeb.I tried very hard to change their attitudes but i failed,i exhibited graet restraint but as i was told by wiser people on naseeb if i continued showing decency they will try to walk all over me.I lost my head and gave them their desired medicine,but you know what?
i feel ashamed facing you since you are such a wonderful and unassuming person,please ignore anything that i have addressed to these mongrels.
 
Chiragh-e-Raah (March 14, 2014 at 6:47pm)
yw naurozkhayal...i empathise with the points you make, been there etc etc. All i will say is please dont let the kind of snide remarks get to you /affect you in that you cant feel free to say /write. As long as one's conscience is clear one should not lett peripheral matters change them for the worse (eg curtail them from writing etc) , so to speak. i am sure you get my meaning
 
naurozkhayal (March 14, 2014 at 1:48pm)
Thanks chiragh -e-raah,i find much solace in your kind comments.Believe me i haven' been able to sleep,iam feeling sick for a insinuation {unconscious though} on my part for hurting someone .I thought we could joke a little but uttering profanities and name calling i disdain.I will be very careful in future!!
 
Chiragh-e-Raah (March 14, 2014 at 5:54am)
naurozkhayal....i dont think it was anything to do with your comment to be honest but yuppp welcome to how this site has become and see /understand why many of us have ceased to write (if at all)). Over past months /latter years no reason has been needed for unpleasant comments /insults/ridicule and personal petty fighting and agendas to infiltrate most journals regardless whether any relevance to subject matter of journal or not. I am certain americanheart will second what i have noted.
 
naurozkhayal (March 13, 2014 at 10:04pm)
I am really sorry for the comments above and i might have been the reason for the comments given by someone.But whatever i said was in a lighter vein and it all happened inadvertently.
 
Chiragh-e-Raah (March 13, 2014 at 6:56am)
as always americanheart..awesome sheyr
 
shahid034756600 (March 13, 2014 at 6:37am)
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
 
shahid034756600 (March 13, 2014 at 6:36am)
hunnnnnnnnnnnn
 
MaxPowerz (March 13, 2014 at 4:23am)
- ab naza'a ka aalam hai mujh pe, tum apni mohabbat wapas lo
- jab kashti doobne lagti hai to bojh utara karte hain

little off topic but one of my favourites....
 
Samuraii (March 12, 2014 at 11:40pm)
Gunaahgar wahan chuuut jayengey sarei..
Jahannam ko bher deingey shayer hamare.
 
SKIPmistadashal (March 12, 2014 at 11:05pm)
supurd e khak kar dala teri ankhon ki masti ne
hazaron saal jee liyte agar tera deedar na hota