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Khawab merey

By americanheart
 
 

gehrey neeley rang ke
khawab merey
uss ki aankhon jaisey

kabhi ansuwon se bheegey
kabhi kajal ki ek lakeer se
jhooti baatoon jaisey

basant ki rang barangi
patangon se, doron se liptey
meethi si uljhan jaisey

kabhi such na huey
par jaltey hi rahey
wafa ke deeyon jaisey

gehrey neeley rang ke
khawaab merey
samadar ki toot-ti lehron jaisey!

 
   Comments: 4     Raters: 2     December 26, 2014 at 8:17pm         
 

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arman47x (January 4, 2015 at 11:41am)
Surkh honto pe dharkhti he wo rangen sharab
jis ko pee kr behaq janey ko jee chata he
 
saadqa (December 27, 2014 at 7:40am)
inhi khuwahishon kay peechay
chuppi khushion say aagay
wafa kay jalte deeoo jaisey, khawab meeray
 
Admirer481 (December 27, 2014 at 1:24am)
"basant ki rang barangi
patangon se, doron se liptey
meethi si uljhan jaisey "

Thats cool analogy! ... and reminds me of my days in Lahore ... and Basant!
 
jan2222 (December 26, 2014 at 11:17pm)
ya sub nazar hai koshi k kash ya nazar ma hum othi tu labo k shor se kobsorat pul nachthi